Monday, May 17, 2010

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  1. Hello My Friend
    The only suggestion I would make to your languge in this part of the blog is the word "we". I feel very strongly that a great part of the struggle in the human condition is the misconception that as an individual any of us can truly know anothers feelings. So when you say "If we try to eliminate these feelings" this will happen, I believe stongly that the statement would convey way more truth and accuracy and therefore enlighten way more people if you said "If I try to eliminate these feelings" this will happen.
    Luv U

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